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How to Write Your First Haiku in 10 Minutes

Published August 12, 2026

You don't need to know what a kigo is, or count sound units, or understand why 5-7-5 doesn't always apply in English, to write a real haiku today. Those are worth learning eventually (start with what a haiku actually is if you want the full picture), but none of it is required for your first one. Here's a process that takes about ten minutes, start to finish.

Step 1: Pick one small, real thing (2 minutes)

Not a feeling. Not a big idea. A thing you actually noticed today: the way steam curled off your coffee, a bus that pulled away just as you reached the stop, a crack in the sidewalk you always step over without thinking about it. Small and specific beats big and vague every time. If you're stuck, look around the room right now and pick the first object that catches your eye.

Step 2: Write it as a plain sentence (2 minutes)

Don't think about form yet. Just describe what happened, in one ordinary sentence, the way you'd tell a friend.

"The cat knocked my coffee cup off the table this morning and I watched it shatter before I even reacted."

That's not a haiku. It's fine. It's a start.

Step 3: Cut everything that isn't the image (2 minutes)

Go back through your sentence and remove anything that explains, comments, or adds feeling instead of showing something concrete. "Before I even reacted" is commentary. Cut it. What's left should be almost entirely nouns and verbs.

Cat, coffee cup, table, shatters.

Step 4: Break it into three lines (2 minutes)

Split what's left into three lines, roughly short, then long, then short. Don't count syllables obsessively; just aim for that shape. (If you want the full explanation of why exact syllable counts are more of a guideline than a rule in English, that's covered elsewhere. For now, just eyeball it.)

morning coffee
the cat's paw sends it
to the floor

Step 5: Read it out loud and trim (2 minutes)

Say it. Anything that sounds clunky, redundant, or over-explained, cut it. Anything that feels like it's telling you how to feel about the moment instead of just showing it to you, cut that too. You're looking for the smallest version of the poem that still lands.

That's it. Five steps, one real moment, one small poem.

A few things that help

  • Keep a running list of small moments. Notes app, a scrap of paper, whatever. You'll forget the good ones by evening if you don't write them down when they happen.
  • Write more than one and pick the best. The first version rarely is. Try the same moment two or three different ways before moving on.
  • Don't chase profound. Some of the best haiku are almost boring on the surface. That's often the point, not a failure.
  • Skip the abstract nouns. "Loneliness," "beauty," "peace" are all telling, not showing. Find the physical thing that makes you feel that way instead, and write that.

Frequently asked questions

Do I need to follow 5-7-5 exactly? No. Aim for a short-long-short rhythm across three lines rather than counting syllables precisely. Plenty of well-regarded English haiku land shorter than a strict 17 syllables.

What if my haiku doesn't have a season reference? That's fine for a first attempt. Traditional haiku lean on a seasonal word, but it's not a requirement to write something worthwhile, especially while you're still finding your footing with the form.

How long should it take to get good at this? Faster than you'd think for a basic, honest haiku; longer if you're chasing the more traditional, technical version of the form. Either is a fine place to start.

If you want a fuller, more technical guide to the process once this quick version clicks, [1] is the standard reference most working poets keep nearby.

Sources

  1. Higginson, William J. (with Penny Harter), The Haiku Handbook: How to Write, Share, and Teach Haiku, McGraw-Hill, 1985. ISBN 978-0-07-028786-0.  (in the library)

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